Don’t Write These Sentences in Your Cover Letter (Gulf Edition)

When it comes to job applications in the Gulf region, first impressions really do matter—and few things shape that impression like your cover letter.

While there’s plenty of advice out there on what to include, today we’re flipping the script. Some phrases might sound polite or even professional at first glance—but in reality, they’re working against you.

Here are the most common sentences that recruiters in the UAE, Saudi Arabia, Qatar, and across the GCC are tired of seeing in cover letters—and what to write instead.

1. “I’m writing to express my interest in the position of…”

This opening line is everywhere—and that’s exactly the problem.

Why it hurts your application:

  • Generic and forgettable

  • Wastes valuable space without adding value

  • Signals that you may be using a template

Say this instead:

“As a bilingual marketing professional with 5+ years of experience in the GCC, I’m excited about the opportunity to contribute to your team.”

Start strong by leading with your unique value—not the job title.

2. “I’m a fast learner and team player.”

This sounds good... until you realize every candidate says it.

Why recruiters ignore it:

  • Overused to the point of meaninglessness

  • Offers no proof or context

  • Doesn’t differentiate you from other applicants

What to say instead:

“In my previous role at a logistics firm in Riyadh, I helped reduce delivery errors by 27% through a new tracking system—despite having no prior logistics experience.”

Always show, don’t tell. Prove that you’re adaptable or collaborative with specific results.

3. “Please find my CV attached.”

In 2025, this line feels dated and unnecessary—especially when applying on platforms like Bayt.com, where attaching a CV is a given.

Why it’s outdated:

  • Takes up space without adding value

  • Sounds like a formal letter from the 1990s

  • Distracts from your main message

Try this instead:

“I’d love the opportunity to further discuss how my skills in operations and team leadership could support your regional expansion.”

Use your closing to show initiative, not state the obvious.

4. “I believe I’m the perfect fit for this role.”

Even if you truly believe this, it can come off as presumptuous—especially if you haven’t backed it up with evidence.

Why it’s risky:

  • Can sound arrogant without supporting details

  • Too definitive in tone

  • Ignores the recruiter’s role in making that judgment

Reframe it:

“This role strongly aligns with my background in F&B operations and customer experience, particularly in fast-paced environments like Dubai.”

Be confident, but let the recruiter connect the dots based on what you show them.

5. “To whom it may concern…”

This one is a red flag.

Why it should never be used:

  • Feels impersonal and lazy

  • Shows you didn’t research the company or hiring team

  • Creates distance instead of connection

Better alternatives:

  • Use the hiring manager’s name if known

  • Or try: “Dear [Department] Hiring Team”

  • Even “Dear [Company Name] Recruitment Team” works better

Taking a few minutes to personalize your greeting shows effort—and it matters in the GCC’s relationship-driven job market.

6. “I need this job because…”

This is an emotional appeal, not a professional pitch.

Why it doesn’t work:

  • Shifts focus from value to need

  • May sound desperate, even if unintentionally

  • Doesn’t explain why you’re right for the role

What works better:

“This role offers the chance to apply my background in customer service and fluency in Arabic to support your expansion into the Saudi market.”

Keep the focus on what you offer, not what you want.

Bonus: Watch Out for These Mistakes Too

Aside from phrases, here are a few other red flags in cover letters:

  • Copy-pasting your CV into the letter

  • Sending the same letter to every job

  • Writing more than one page

  • Using AI tools without editing (Yes, recruiters can tell)


Cover Letters Still Matter in 2025—Especially in the GCC

Many employers in the UAE, Saudi Arabia, Qatar, and beyond still expect a professional, personalized cover letter. It’s your chance to stand out—but only if it’s well-written.

Use this checklist before submitting:

✅ Is it tailored to the job and company?
✅ Does it highlight your top 1–2 achievements?
✅ Does it sound like you—not a generic template?
✅ Is it no more than 3–4 paragraphs?

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Natalie Mahmoud Fawzi Al Saad
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